Personal statement for UCAS and graduate school application

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I am an admissions consultant specialising in guiding students to apply to universities or graduate schools in the US and the UK. Most of my clients are third or fourth-year undergraduates or professionals with a few years of work experience applying to graduate schools.

My teaching philosophy is to be a mentor, friend, and sometimes emotional support counsellor for my clients. The admissions process can be daunting, especially for students with little or no experience writing personal statements and academic essays. I guide my students on a journey of self-discovery as they explore what they want to study and why.

When I am working with a student on crafting their personal statement, I will first ask my student to brainstorm ideas. We will discuss what to keep and what to delete when we are structuring the essay. I will then guide them on using the STAR method to give examples and details to demonstrate their skill or experience. The final stage is polishing the essay so it reads well and still retains the student's voice.

I also coach secondary school and undergraduate students how to write academic essays. They need to first become familiar with the materials by reading extensively and writing summaries and critiques. I will then guide them on how to come up with an argument and how to structure the essay. Finally, we will add supporting details and examples to demonstrate the main points.

Lieu

En ligne depuis Royaume-Uni

Présentation

I have a PhD in Theology from Cambridge.

I have 20+ years of experience teaching English and 10+ years of experience coaching students how to write an engaging personal statement and editing dissertations, papers, and research proposals.

My subject expertise includes:
• Translating from Mandarin to English
• Editing academic papers and admissions essays
• University and graduate school admissions, especially Oxbridge and Ivy League admissions
• TOEFL/IELTS test prep, especially English speaking and writing
• Academic English writing

Education

PhD in Theology, University of Cambridge
MPhil in Religious Studies, University of Cambridge
BA in English, National Taiwan University

Expérience / Qualifications

20+ years of teaching English
10+ years of coaching students how to write their personal statement

Age

Adolescents (13-17 ans)

Adultes (18-64 ans)

Seniors (65+ ans)

Niveau du Cours

Débutant

Intermédiaire

Avancé

Durée

60 minutes

Enseigné en

anglais

chinois

Compétences

Écriture d'essai

Aide à la rédaction de cv

Ecriture

Disponibilité semaine type

(GMT -05:00)

New York

Cours par webcam

Mon

Tue

Wed

Thu

Fri

Sat

Sun

00-04

04-08

08-12

12-16

16-20

20-24

Essay writing dissertation writing in a humanities or social sciences subject

669.06 CNY /h

I have a PhD in Theology from Cambridge. I studied English Literature as an undergraduate. I have 20+ years of experience teaching English and 10+ years of experience coaching students how to write an engaging personal statement and editing dissertations, papers, and research proposals.

I can work with you on how to write an academic essay in a humanities or social sciences subject. Do note that while my background is in Theology and English, I can guide you on how to write an academic paper in other subjects since research papers follow the same format. However, I will not be able to advise you on subject-specific details.

English as a foreign language TOEFL IELTS English speaking English writing academic English

523.61 CNY /h

My English speaking courses are paired up with my English writing courses.

You can choose the article you want to work on. It can be a news article about current affairs, an article from National Geographic or Harvard Business Review, or a fun article about dogs.

We will work on one article for each set of writing and speaking courses.

For the writing course, you will write a 1000-word summary and critique of the article and send it to me. I will revise your essay, give you feedback on what you can improve, and explain why your sentences are incorrect or unidiomatic.

The writing course is conducted via email.

We will then have a speaking course on Zoom or Skype.

My English speaking courses are all about YOU speaking and me correcting your mistakes. English speaking skills can’t be improved through chit-chat.

It is about correcting your mistakes repeatedly until you have internalised the correct usage.

I am an extremely patient teacher. Language skills can only be acquired through repetition and having someone correct the same mistake multiple times.

In the speaking course, you will present your selected article. I want you to take notes for your presentation before the class.

You will summarise the article, and I will correct your grammar, pronunciation, and word usage mistakes.

You will do your presentation a few times until there are few mistakes and you sound fluent.

We will then move on to a discussion of the article.

I also offer test prep courses for the TOEFL and IELTS. I specialise in teaching the writing and speaking sections.

Gwinny

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I specialize in teaching English in school. I would like to teach the students all the more difficult parts of the subject matter in a simple way, so that they are motivated to get started with this beautiful language.

- Vocabulary
- Grammar
- Speaking
- Writing
- Listening
- Reading

So if you have any questions or you need help, just let me know, and I hope to see you soon!

Kind regards, Gwinny

Youssef

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Hello!
effective communication is essential when integrating into a work group, namely even to flourish in a position within a company. then the development of skills in oral communication makes it possible to facilitate the exchange of ideas between employees, making them more fruitful. without forgetting of course the writing skills: emails, reports...
Feel free to contact me for more information.
Thank you

Hind

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Graduated from the International University of Casablanca as a speech therapist, I learned a lot about oral and written language, and child developmental psychology. I am ready to help your children either with their homework or to learn English or French in a fun way (without necessarily staying 100% academic) online or in person!

Valérie

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Le français: de la lecture à l'écriture en passant par les subtilités orthographiques, les conjugaisons et la grammaire ; maîtrisez la langue française et jonglez avec les mots.

Ma méthode porte sur l'expérimentation et le ludique de façon à mieux ancrer les bases et ensuite les explorer de façon personnalisée.

Niveau primaire ou secondaire, j'accompagne enfants ou adultes dans une mise à niveau, une remédiation une découverte ou un approfondissement de la langue ou même à une préparation à un examen. ( CEB, CE1D)

J'aide aussi aux devoirs, aux réalisations de dossiers (de présentation, de fin d'études -TFE, Memoire- ) ou aux à d'autres projets d'écriture : méthode, recherche, synthèse.

Philosophe, agrégée en philosophie, j'ai pu avoir l'expérience de l'enseignement en secondaire durant 7 années. Je suis maintenant formatrice privée et rédactrice.

Au plaisir de vous coacher,

Germán

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I am a Spanish teacher since 2018, I have taught in a private school in Turkey, and also I worked with Cervantes Institute in Istanbul, I am currently working with Cervantes Institute from Brussels. I have experience with all ages, lots of materials, and resources to share with you as a student. If you want to improve your Spanish language skills or take the DELE exam I can also help you since I am an examiner at all levels. My lessons are more about speaking we can have some grammar explanations but most of the time we will be speaking in order to improve what we are learning.

Majda

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I give French lessons for beginners and intermediate levels. The courses can consist, according to the needs of the student, of communication and oral techniques, pronunciation or writing.
I have an efficient and easy method to help students do their exercises and excel in their classes.
Just be serious when learning, and in turn I am your faithful support to succeed in this task.

Courage, will and enthusiasm are the keystones.

Cami

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Improve your skills to better manage your written communication: your objectives in terms of written communication may be diverse and the objective of these sessions is precisely to support you in better achieving them. So, how can we send a clear message, be impactful, create a difference and make an impact?

➤ Whether your objective is personal or professional, written communication is an activity based on techniques, tools, a method and know-how, reflecting the author's involvement in his writing.

➤ Relevant and successful written communication must always be effective and efficient, with clear, simple and impactful messages, creating a match between the message received and the message sent. Coherence between form and content.

➤ So, how can you convince and be impactful, challenge and leave an impression, enhance your content, address your interlocutors relevantly and optimize the quality & clarity of your message? It is precisely a question of going through, applying and deploying practical and effective techniques, taking care of both substance and form, all in a professional or personal context. For this, there are very specific techniques.

➤ Thus, mastered, the practical method allows, through a set of modules supporting pragmatic & concrete techniques, to improve one's written communication.

➤ To achieve your objective and overcome the blockages encountered through concrete techniques & a targeted methodology, it is a question of:
✓decode and use practical communication tools from great authors
✓highlight your text and enhance it to arouse interest
✓create consistency between the message sent and the message received
✓adopt effective, simple, fair and engaging language
✓use sentences, phrases and expressions to be precise, simple, effective & engaging
✓write proactively and express/transmit your ideas/message clearly
✓propose a constructive solution to problems, while drawing on your own relational skills
✓enhance your potential for expression and creativity
✓connect your communication objectives (project, institution, values, ideas, demands, etc.) with the form of your expression
✓practical techniques to encourage reader engagement
✓Strengthen the structure of your communication and develop a convincing argument in order to sell your ideas and projects
✓better prepare your message and arguments; anticipating objections and delicate situations; by preparing and structuring an attractive and convincing presentation framework; by adequately managing difficult situations
(...)

➤ In short, each session combines adapted techniques & practical exercises, so that you can put them into practice immediately, and from the first session.

THE TRAINER
➤ With training from Grande Ecole post-preparatory classes & Ivy League university in the United States, our teacher trainer has specialized and has worked for more than 18 years in the field, in Europe and North America, in renowned international public and private establishments, regularly speaking in forums and conferences, and also offering personalized INDIVIDUAL support, with pedagogy and careful methodology as the watchwords.

➤ PLACE, TIMETABLE, PRICES
✓ Locations: Geneva-Lausanne-Fribourg-Zurich-Neuchâtel-Lugano-Basel-Neuchâtel-Berne-Lucerne-Brussels-Luxembourg-Paris-Lyon. But currently, these sessions continue to be offered by videoconference in the current context and in accordance with general demand which is almost unanimous on this subject.

✓ Indeed, apart from the classic advantages of videoconferencing (time saving related to travel & their unforeseen events, eco-responsibility, increased schedule flexibility, etc.), the quality of the session & the interaction remain identical. In addition, the entire exchange, notes and recommendations are immediately transcribed on the dedicated chat.

✓ To support us among ourselves & to be pleasant to you in this sustainable / particular period and in a spirit of solidarity, the fees are temporarily reduced and will not increase after the start of our sessions.

✓ Languages: French/English.

✓ The progress following these private sessions is perceptible from 2 sessions (*2024 study).

✓ As other people do regularly, you can also please your loved ones by offering gift vouchers available all year round.

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The Arabic writing system may seem challenging at first glance, but in reality, it’s a beautifully structured alphabet that anyone can learn. With the right approach and a bit of dedication, mastering it takes less time than you might think.

In this class, we will learn and memorize the shape of the letters and their correct pronunciation through listening exercises and writing practice. As we explore the alphabet, we will also dive into Arabic culture and traditions, making the learning process both engaging and meaningful.

After years of teaching Arabic, I created this class to help:

Curious learners who want to explore the Arabic alphabet and pronunciation.
Arabic speakers who never had the chance to learn how to write.
Those struggling with the language and looking for a stress-free way to break the ice.

Francesca

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Améliorez vos résultats, développez votre pensée et votre créativité!

Vous souhaitez réussir vos examens? Rendre un travail bien écrit et bien structuré. Je suis là pour vous aider à atteindre cet objectif. Avec plus de 20 ans d'expérience dans la communication et l'enseignement, j'ai affiné l'art de la rédaction. Mon parcours d'enseignante en primaire et secondaire m'a permis de développer une approche pédagogique unique.

Rejoignez-moi pour transformer votre écriture en un outil puissant et captivant. Réservez votre cours dès maintenant et commencez votre voyage dans le monde fascinant des mots!.

Paul

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Do you need to improve your English so that you can participate fluently and confidently in business meetings, presentations, webinars, telephone conversations or interviews? You may be aiming for a job in the EU institutions or other organisations in Brussels. Or you could be working in an international company or studying for a Masters or another qualification...

I have been a qualified, professional English teacher and translator for more than 20 years. My courses enable learners to actively produce the language, repeat useful expressions until they are habitual and correct mistakes until they are removed. Although I am happy to explain and practice grammatical issues, the focus is on effective, correct and appropriate communication by using visual material, videos, interesting topics for discussion and challenging quizzes. As I have advanced knowledge of French, German and Czech, I can particularly appreciate and correct the issues speakers of these languages have in English, but this is also the case for Dutch speakers.

There is also the possibility of specialist English courses in the areas linked to my experience (see below): how the EU works; environmental, energy, regional or agricultural policies; economics.

- Advisor in EU policies and funding for 12 years (regional policy, economic development)
- Director of a regional representation to the EU and member of a management team
- Certificate in TESOL with business
- BA(Honours) in Modern Languages & Modern History, Oxford University
- Post-graduate in Economics, London University

Eleonora

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EN
My teaching method is based on a practical, progressive, and personalized approach. Each lesson is tailored to the student's level, objectives, and pace. The goal is to learn with confidence, making the language engaging and accessible.
Typical lesson structure:

- Brief review: quick reminder of the content already covered to consolidate learning.
- New grammar or vocabulary: clear explanation, concrete examples and practice in context.
- Oral practice: interactive exercises to improve oral expression.

Whether you're a beginner, student, adult, or simply curious, my lessons are designed to offer clear, motivating, and personalized learning. My goal is to help you progress while enjoying the discovery of the Italian language and culture.
With me, you will learn to:

- Speaking from the very first lessons
- Understanding everyday Italian
- Acquire a solid foundation in grammar

Gain confidence in both your written and spoken communication. I create a supportive environment where mistakes are part of the learning process and every step forward is valued. You will never feel judged, but guided with patience and a structured approach.
I would be delighted to accompany you on your language learning journey.

ENG
My teaching method is based on a practical, progressive, and personalized approach. Each lesson is tailored to the student's level, goals, and pace. The aim is to learn with confidence, making the language lively and accessible.
Typical lesson structure:
- Brief Review: Quick recap of previously covered material to consolidate learning.
- New Grammar or Vocabulary: Clear explanation, concrete examples, and contextual practice.
- Oral Practice: Engaging exercises to improve speaking skills.

Whether you are a beginner, a student, an adult, or simply curious, my lessons are designed to provide clear, motivating, and personalized learning experiences. My goal is to help you progress while enjoying the discovery of Italian language and culture.
With me, you will learn to:
- Speak from the very first lessons
- Understand everyday Italian
- Acquire a solid grammar foundation

Gain confidence in both written and spoken expression. I create a supportive environment where mistakes are part of the learning process and every improvement is valued. You will never feel “judged,” but guided with patience and method. I would be delighted to accompany you on your language learning journey.

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Hello and welcome! My name is Charlotte, and I am a professional translator and editor with a Bachelor's degree in Translation from the Higher Institute of Translators and Interpreters in Brussels. I have been translating from English to French for over nine years. I have had the opportunity to work with prestigious platforms and companies such as Netflix, Airbnb, Booking.com, and numerous literary publishers, translating content ranging from series and films to novels and marketing materials.

I offer personalized English-French translation courses tailored to all levels: whether you're a beginner looking to learn the basics, a language student, or a professional seeking to refine your skills for the workplace, I will guide you step by step. We will work with real-world texts, practical exercises, and professional methods to help you master translation with precision, fluency, and naturalness.

My approach is warm and supportive, yet always professional: I want you to progress while enjoying the learning process. Together, we will develop your vocabulary, your sense of style, your rigor, and your confidence to become an effective and creative translator.

Ready to boost your translation skills and translate into impeccable French? Book your first lesson now and let's begin this linguistic adventure together!

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🤩Help your child discover the joy of learning English! Using games, videos, songs, puzzles, and creative activities, they will gain confidence, improve pronunciation, expand vocabulary, and enhance listening and speaking skills. Lessons are personalized to their pace to make learning fun and effective.
⚠️Each lesson is tailored to the child’s learning style and individual needs, including learners with attention difficulties, ADHD, autism, dyslexia, or other specific learning needs.
Communication is at the heart of every session, whether it involves grammar, vocabulary, speaking, or listening comprehension.

Zoé

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Editing and proofreading is a profession that can be practiced in all fields... writing is everywhere! This course is designed for anyone wishing to gain an overview of what editing and proofreading entails, as well as learn its fundamentals. It covers editing techniques and the essential concepts needed for effective proofreading and editing. Of course, the course content is tailored to each individual.

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Objective: to access the job that suits you, from searching for job postings to signing the contract.

➤ Highlight your profile: identification of transferable skills, creation of a well-presented and attractive CV (in form as well as content) and a compelling cover letter.

➤ Shine in interviews and stand out (in both content and form): live filmed simulations analyzed to progress quickly (oral expression, body language, quick wit...).

➤ (Re)find momentum: identify your values, strengths and areas for improvement to build a clear and motivating professional project and draw new momentum from your career.

➤ Follow-up via videoconference: notes and recommendations accessible at all times via chat.

➤ After a few sessions, you will feel confident and comfortable with your job search (sending strong applications, interviews, etc.), which will seem natural and familiar. Concrete results: noticeable progress after just 2 sessions (2026 study).

➤ THE TRAINER/CONSULTANT
A graduate of a prestigious French business school and an Ivy League university in the United States, and a former Human Resources Director, he combines academic rigor with modern teaching methods. With over 18 years of experience in Europe and North America, he has taught at prestigious international institutions (both public and private), and regularly speaks in Switzerland, France, Belgium, Luxembourg, and Canada, as well as at various forums and conferences.

A recognized specialist, he offers personalized and accessible support based on active listening, a proven methodology, and tailored teaching methods. Whether through one-on-one sessions, workshops, or group training, his approach combines customization, efficiency, and professionalism for rapid, visible results.

➤ LOCATIONS, TIMES

✓ Areas of intervention:
-Switzerland (Geneva, Lausanne, Fribourg, Zurich, Neuchâtel, Lugano, Basel, Bern, Lucerne)
-Belgium (Brussels, Antwerp, Charleroi, Liège)
-Luxembourg
-On request: France (Paris, Lyon) and Canada (Montreal)

✓ Currently: sessions are primarily conducted via videoconference – a format favored by almost all participants, as it combines the same high-quality interaction with great organizational flexibility. All content, notes, and recommendations are provided directly through the dedicated chat. Advantages: time savings (no travel), flexible scheduling, comfort, and eco-responsibility.

✓ Languages: French / English.

➤ 90% of the people supported achieved their professional goals (2025 study).

✓ Special offers: gift vouchers available all year round – an original and useful way to please your loved ones.

✓ Schedules to be defined together, adjusting as best as possible to your constraints.

✓ 100% tailor-made program, adapted to each need.

✓ Why choose this training?
-Because you benefit from international expertise at the service of your objectives.
-Because each session is personalized and you will leave with concrete tools.
-Because the approach is not theoretical: it is lively, interactive and results-oriented.
-Because you benefit from a motivating, supportive and stimulating environment, which promotes confidence and rapid progress.
-Because in just a few sessions, you will already notice a tangible difference.