IB Writing Feedback for Grades 4–8 – Detailed, Teacher-Quality Support

Àpd 271.57 CNY /h

I’m an experienced international school teacher with 8 years in the classroom, specializing in the IB PYP. I offer clear, structured feedback on essays and inquiry projects, using IB rubrics to guide improvement. My goal is to help students succeed in their writing assignments through detailed and thorough feedback.

What I provide:
Strengths and areas for improvement

Rubric-aligned comments (clarity, structure, coherence, grammar)

Actionable next steps for revision

Motivating feedback tailored to younger learners (Grades 4–8)

Why choose me?
Experienced international school teacher

IB PYP & MYP expertise

Feedback that is constructive, clear, and student-friendly

Fast and reliable turnaround

Informations supplémentaires

bring a laptop

Lieu

En ligne depuis Cambodge

Présentation

I am a native English speaker based in Phnom Penh, Cambodia from the United Kingdom. I have three years teaching experience with two years tutoring. I have experience teaching a range of different students from ages 5-18, from different backgrounds.

With five years of experience teaching IPC, I have developed an expansive understanding of inquiry-based learning. I aspire to broaden my understanding and skill set, seeking to expand this skillset with a new learning opportunity. My experiences and coaching in safeguarding have significantly enhanced my ability to empathize with students, allowing me to be more emotionally attuned to their needs. This deeper understanding has improved communication, enabling me to connect more effectively with students.

Education

P.G.C.E. (Master's Level)
Bachelor's Degree

With five years of experience teaching IPC, I have developed an expansive understanding of inquiry-based learning. I aspire to broaden my understanding and skill set, seeking to expand this skillset with a new learning opportunity. My experiences in coaching in safeguarding have significantly enhanced my ability to empathize with students, allowing me to be more emotionally attuned to their needs. This deeper understanding has improved communication, enabling me to connect more effectively with students.

Expérience / Qualifications

8 years teaching

I have eight years of experience working with primary students, during which I have developed a strong foundation in teaching young learners. Additionally, I have taught beginner adults, helping them to build their skills from the ground up. My experience also extends to teaching middle school students, allowing me to engage with a wider age range and adapt my teaching methods accordingly.

Age

Enfants (7-12 ans)

Adolescents (13-17 ans)

Adultes (18-64 ans)

Niveau du Cours

Débutant

Intermédiaire

Avancé

Durée

60 minutes

Enseigné en

anglais

Compétences

Écriture d'essai

Ecriture

Vocabulaire

Disponibilité semaine type

(GMT -04:00)

New York

Cours par webcam

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08-12

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20-24

Native Speaking Writing Teacher for Exam Preparation

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I am an native speaking English teacher with four years of experience teaching, and 2 years of tutoring experience.

I have experience helping students develop their writing skills for:

ELT exams
ISEB exams
SATs

I provide students with the tools they need to be successful for their exams.
I firmly believe making mistakes when learning is positive.
I take a flexible and holistic approach taking into the students individual needs.
I am happy to discuss my experience and educational background with you if required.

I look forward to hearing from you!

Native Speaking English Teacher (Beginner to Advanced)

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I am an native speaking English teacher with four years of experience teaching, and 2 years of tutoring experience.

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Vocabulary expansion
Improving fluency

For advanced speakers I will focus on:
Specific topic areas, such as business, in which we can refine our approach to your particular preferrred area of study.

I firmly believe making mistakes when learning is positive.
I take a flexible and holistic approach taking into the students individual needs.
I am happy to discuss my experience and educational background with you if required.

I look forward to hearing from you!

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I am an experienced Dutch/Flemish teacher, coach and tutor, and will help you to significantly improve your language skills (oral and/or written). All courses are fully adapted to your specific needs, expectations and context. Your current proficiency level can be beginner, intermediate or advanced. Get in touch with me, and I will be happy to give you further background and information.

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Need help writing your thesis/final project/paper? As a 33-year-old civil engineer, I've been supporting students of all disciplines and ages with their final projects for 10 years, both in Dutch and English. Whether you're at the beginning, middle, or end of your thesis, together we'll definitely get through it!

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Improve your skills to better manage your written communication: your objectives in terms of written communication may be diverse and the objective of these sessions is precisely to support you in better achieving them. So, how can we send a clear message, be impactful, create a difference and make an impact?

➤ Whether your objective is personal or professional, written communication is an activity based on techniques, tools, a method and know-how, reflecting the author's involvement in his writing.

➤ Relevant and successful written communication must always be effective and efficient, with clear, simple and impactful messages, creating a match between the message received and the message sent. Coherence between form and content.

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(...)

➤ In short, each session combines adapted techniques & practical exercises, so that you can put them into practice immediately, and from the first session.

THE TRAINER
➤ With training from Grande Ecole post-preparatory classes & Ivy League university in the United States, our teacher trainer has specialized and has worked for more than 18 years in the field, in Europe and North America, in renowned international public and private establishments, regularly speaking in forums and conferences, and also offering personalized INDIVIDUAL support, with pedagogy and careful methodology as the watchwords.

➤ PLACE, TIMETABLE, PRICES
✓ Locations: Geneva-Lausanne-Fribourg-Zurich-Neuchâtel-Lugano-Basel-Neuchâtel-Berne-Lucerne-Brussels-Luxembourg-Paris-Lyon. But currently, these sessions continue to be offered by videoconference in the current context and in accordance with general demand which is almost unanimous on this subject.

✓ Indeed, apart from the classic advantages of videoconferencing (time saving related to travel & their unforeseen events, eco-responsibility, increased schedule flexibility, etc.), the quality of the session & the interaction remain identical. In addition, the entire exchange, notes and recommendations are immediately transcribed on the dedicated chat.

✓ To support us among ourselves & to be pleasant to you in this sustainable / particular period and in a spirit of solidarity, the fees are temporarily reduced and will not increase after the start of our sessions.

✓ Languages: French/English.

✓ The progress following these private sessions is perceptible from 2 sessions (*2024 study).

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SUMMARY DESCRIPTION (IN BRIEF):
➤Unleash your writing skills and finally realize your writing project!
Novels, short stories, life stories, theses, songs or simple texts: these workshops help you overcome your blocks and transform your ideas into vivid and inspiring stories.

➤ Together, we will work to:
-Overcome your fear of the blank page and awaken your creativity
-Develop style, vocabulary, coherence and authenticity
-Creating characters, settings, and captivating storylines
-Explore your imagination, your emotions, and your flaws to turn them into a strength
-Alternating theory and practice with concrete exercises and personalized feedback

➤ Proofreading, correction, optimization of your texts possible.
➤Objective: to write with pleasure, progress faster and bring your project to completion.

➤Let yourself be guided: your dream of writing can become a reality.

DETAILED DESCRIPTION:
➤Exploring and sharing the pleasure of words, building the stories that inhabit you, developing your expression, deepening your creativity, exploring contemporary writing, proposing a novel, short stories, a life story, an (auto)biography, a fiction, an essay, song lyrics, various texts or simply a report, a thesis, a report for professional or academic purposes... these are among the objectives of these workshops to deepen or initiate writing and realize one's aspirations by prioritizing the pleasure of writing based on elements of personalized pedagogy.

➤Overcome your fears and unlock creative inspiration to finally complete your project.

Let yourself be guided and finally realize your dream of writing.
➤ Overcome your fears
➤ Discover the secret to producing high-quality writing that's 100% enjoyable and 0% writer's block.
➤ Awaken this writer's flame that has been dormant in you for a long time
➤ Build unwavering legitimacy and overcome the fear of failure, lack of time and procrastination that keep you from moving forward.

In short, overcome your fear of writing. Isn't it frustrating to be consumed by the desire to write your project and yet unable to do so? Break down that insurmountable wall that's holding you back.

This involves combining improvements in form with refinements in content. For example, concrete techniques for starting your text and overcoming writer's block, feedback/suggestions on your texts, writing and style exercises based on a prompt, a series of precise/pragmatic recommendations and their implementation.

That is why, if your manuscript is stuck and you don't know how to start or continue it, if you have all the ideas but don't know what form they should take, if you want to save time in the creative process: let's build the architecture of your story together.

Learning objectives include:
• Discover writing, build confidence, let your own literary voice/path emerge, and unleash your imagination
• Studying and constructing a text, song lyrics...
• Calmly refine the style and create consistency between form and content
• Research and develop your vocabulary
• Acquire techniques and know-how to convey your message both clearly and simply
• Differentiate between writing for oneself and writing for others
• Explore your creativity and develop your expression
• To construct a complete story by creating characters, settings, lively scenes...
• Acquire and master practical writing tools, always with a focus on simplicity/simplification and efficiency (both in content and form)
• Discover contemporary writing and diversify your practice
• Acquire narrative techniques to engage in long stories

So, start, resume or finish a piece of writing you have dreamed of for a long time if you want to write but don't know where to start; if you have a story but don't know how to tell it; if you love to write but have lost your inspiration; if you have a manuscript buried in a drawer and you are afraid of failing.

To achieve this, the first step is to unleash your writing and let go: strengthen your imagination, explore your inspiration, and cultivate your originality. Next, turn your weaknesses into a driving force for writing by exploring your wounds to better utilize them and adopt an effective writing method. Finally, master writing techniques and bring characters to life while crafting captivating stories, controlling pacing, and developing suspenseful plots.

All this by combining theory and practical/concrete applications: writing assignments based on exercises and then within the framework of your project.

During the sessions, you will be guided in your writing project. The trainer will support you in your written communication and offer tools, while helping you to work on and/or optimize your style and imagination.

Proofreading, revising, correcting and formatting articles, theses, etc.: these options are also possible.

Furthermore, these sessions allow one to improve one's written communication and to study the different methods to achieve this (email, letter, report, presentation...), both in terms of content and form.

➤ THE TRAINER - TEACHER CONSULTANT
A graduate of a prestigious French Grande École and an Ivy League university in the United States, he combines academic rigor with modern teaching methods. With over 18 years of experience in Europe and North America, he has taught at prestigious international institutions (both public and private), and regularly speaks in Switzerland, France, Belgium, Luxembourg, and Canada, as well as at various forums and conferences.

A recognized specialist, he offers personalized and accessible support based on active listening, a proven methodology, and tailored teaching methods. Whether through one-on-one sessions, workshops, or group training, his approach combines customization, efficiency, and professionalism for rapid, visible results.

➤ LOCATIONS, TIMES

✓ Areas of intervention:
-Switzerland (Geneva, Lausanne, Fribourg, Zurich, Neuchâtel, Lugano, Basel, Bern, Lucerne)
-Belgium (Brussels, Antwerp, Charleroi, Liège)
-Luxembourg
-On request: France (Paris, Lyon) and Canada (Montreal)

✓ Currently: sessions are primarily conducted via videoconference – a format favored by almost all participants, as it combines the same high-quality interaction with great organizational flexibility. All content, notes, and recommendations are provided directly through the dedicated chat. Advantages: time savings (no travel), flexible scheduling, comfort, and eco-responsibility.

✓ Languages: French / English.

✓ Results: noticeable progress from 2 sessions (2025 study).

✓ Special offers: gift vouchers available all year round – an original and useful way to please your loved ones.

✓ Schedules to be defined together, adjusting as best as possible to your constraints.

✓ 100% tailor-made program, adapted to each need.

✓ Why choose this training?
-Because you benefit from international expertise at the service of your objectives.
-Because each session is personalized and you will leave with concrete tools.
-Because the approach is not theoretical: it is lively, interactive and results-oriented.
-Because you benefit from a motivating, supportive and stimulating environment, which promotes confidence and rapid progress.
-Because in just a few sessions, you will already notice a tangible difference.

Hervé

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La Langue Wolof est la langue principale au Senegal. Mon cours vous permettra d'apprendre le wolof pour raison familiale, professionnelle, touristique ou simplement pour apprendre cette langue et/ou la culture.
Suivant vos objectifs, je pourrais vous aider a apprendre les bases de la langue pour la vie quotidienne, la grammaire ou approfondir la langue.
Etant natif du Senegal et parlant couramment le français et me débrouillant en anglais je serais a votre disposition pour vous aider.
De plus, j'ai l'experience de l'enseignement et dans la traduction du wolof depuis 10ans. Je connais la logique de la langue ainsi que ses particularités et sa grammaire.